Many people are in the circumstance of internet and influenced by the cyberplace. Students research the data on the internet for their homework. A girl does internet shopping to buy her new clothes. Midle-aged couple book a ticket of play for their wedding anniversary. Internet takes a great part of life nowadays without distinction of sex or age. Hence cyberculture has been a issue today, especially internet anonymity - using another name or hiding real name in internet. There are many conflicting arguments about internet anonymity : interenet anonymity is beneficial or harmful. Actually, internet anonymity has more benefits than side-effects and it is needed in Korea.
1. Attention grabber
I grabbed the attention of audience by suggesting examples to show how internet takes important part in our lives. Then I pointed out that cyberculture, especially interent anonymity becomes issue today.
2. Explains the topic
I suggested the definition of internet anonymity and conflicting arguments of internet anonymity.
3. My thesis
I think it is clear and simple thesis.
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